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hahah finally the last one the un-chibified version of jen and chris xD LOL I just wished you'll love this T_T since this is the last commission i owe you. . .>w< it was great doing your commissions it's awesome getting to know your characters and such xD nice working with you and thank you very much for purchasing. . .^_^
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Hello! Before I get started on writing, I just want to say that this is my second critique, I think I still need some practice with this but I hope you find my comments helpful!
I really like the 'old' technique you have used; parts of the image look distressed which I think looks really good.
The main thing I wanted to point out that the blossom petals look rather sharp compared to the rest of the picture: perhaps it could benefit the picture if the outlines were removed, creating a more softened look?
I also think there is a little lack of shine on the girl's hair, maybe a little more added in would look better?
Overall what I wrote, I think that this is a lovely picture and the person in reciept of this will be very pleased! I know I would be!
Keep up the good work!